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Enjoyed this post/journal. I can see that TOK has definitely influenced your writing and thinking processes. The second paragraph is some excellent analysis. I may be wrong, but your third paragraph could use some work. Language is off the charts. - Jordan G.
I like how you turned something as simple as repetition of words into something more complicated. I did not previously see the connections between the two plays. Your observations and analysis is very thought provoking. I like how you structured this post, definitely shows the structure of a 5 paragrapher. - Anthony Q.
I really like this post. It really has a voice and definitely contained personal interpretation and inclusion of outside info into analysis. That makes this post great. - Montana A.
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